I'm reading through my advisor's notes on the manuscript. At one point he circles the word 'swampy' and says 'You use this word a lot - starting to get noticeable.' So I ran 'swampy' through the Edit > Find tool in Word, and it's true - I use 'swampy' eight times in the manuscript. Eight things in the story are swampy. I had no idea the word had such a powerful hold on my imagination, but it does.
(I usually use it in connection with vomit. Just a bit of trivia for you there).
Showing posts with label words. Show all posts
Showing posts with label words. Show all posts
Wednesday, June 18, 2008
Sunday, February 17, 2008
Frequent offenders
These are words, or collections of words, that I over-use when writing:
Quite
A bit
Not really
A little
A couple
A few
A while
Notice that they are all pretty vapid, colourless things ... qualifiers. They're unnecessary and weaken writing.
"I am a bit cold."
"I am cold."
So much stronger just to cut them out. I'm doing a search-and-destroy to expunge them from the book. I think I use them in my writing (unconsciously) because I use them a lot in my speech. I've got a very British accent (like a newsreader), and I use typical British understatement a lot. "Not bad" when something is good. "I'm a bit down" when I'm depressed. It annoys me sometimes, and I'm trying to be aware of it and say what I mean, but it's hard. Luckily there is an Edit - Find - Replace command in Word. Would be nice if there was one in my head.
Total word count: 49,000 (I didn't quite make it to 50,000 over the weekend)
Today's word count: 1,000 so far
Cups of coffee: four
What's playing: Moby
Quite
A bit
Not really
A little
A couple
A few
A while
Notice that they are all pretty vapid, colourless things ... qualifiers. They're unnecessary and weaken writing.
"I am a bit cold."
"I am cold."
So much stronger just to cut them out. I'm doing a search-and-destroy to expunge them from the book. I think I use them in my writing (unconsciously) because I use them a lot in my speech. I've got a very British accent (like a newsreader), and I use typical British understatement a lot. "Not bad" when something is good. "I'm a bit down" when I'm depressed. It annoys me sometimes, and I'm trying to be aware of it and say what I mean, but it's hard. Luckily there is an Edit - Find - Replace command in Word. Would be nice if there was one in my head.
Total word count: 49,000 (I didn't quite make it to 50,000 over the weekend)
Today's word count: 1,000 so far
Cups of coffee: four
What's playing: Moby
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